Peeping Tom involved a struggling
protagonist Mark ,who worked through his internal unrest by killing females
with his tri-pod. Devices used in the film reflecting it as metacinema were
when the viewer was able to look through Mark’s camera lens while he was
attacking his victims. He was working on a documentary and for the audience to
view his work as a director it adds to the complexity of Marks disorder. The
scenes where Mark would be looking into Helen's window mirrored the camera lens
view because of the window frame. The window scenes pushes the audience to look
at Mark in his natural creepy state. Instead of him examining his tortured
victims through his camera lens we the audience examine him from our
comfortable place, on the other side of the window. I was wondering about his
documentary he was working on and if the audience was going to get to watch a
greater duration of it. I was expecting that would be the case tying in a bit
more of metacinema, being that the audience seemingly had a part in its
creation. Since that wasn't so the biggest use of metacinema comes from the
camera lens view. This was a choice that had the audience wondering and
configuring how Mark was killing these women. Did it really matter how they
were being killed? Probably not, but the fact that I was very intrigued over
this makes me think this small camera lens view was used to engage the audience
in more then just a gruesome murder scene and was used to probe the audiences
curiosity about what is so fantasying about capturing violence on film?
Sherlock Jr. used
a variety of metacinema devices over the duration of the film. This silent
comedy was directed by Buster Keaton who also starred in the movie as the
projectionist, which added a sly addition to the meta quality by imposing the
director directly into the film. There is a bit of build up till Keaton exposes
the camera in Sherlock Jr., this may have been intentional to allow the further
metacinema devices to be easily understood, otherwise if the first scene was
Keaton transitioning into hard core awesome detective alter ego the film would
be confusing; which is ‘real’ and which is ‘fake’ would be hard to distinguish.
So,
Keaton (the projectionist) falls asleep while working in the theatre and slowly
the film that patrons are watching swiftly turns into another version of
Keaton’s reality. The subtle transition challenges the audience to think and
adjust; it happens so fast at first it is easy to miss, but then Keaton (the
projectionist) parades through this dream fake reality into multiple diverse
places and scenes, falling between a busy city street and then nearly tripping
off a cliff in the next consecutive brief clip. I question why these quick
clips are necessary in the film. Possibly because Keaton as a director wanted
to ensure that the audience was on the same page as him, so he could have a
film inside of a film without it being mistaken for just better dressed actors
and a more upscale home. As the projectionist seems to stare directly into the
camera he once again asks more from the cinema in front of him to help him
fulfill his dream of getting the girl by watching a romantic scene and
mimicking the actions of the actors. These devices of having a movie inside of
movie and the projectionist escaping into dream world and eventually seemingly
acknowledging the camera are what makes Sherlock. Jr metacinema.
In general you should avoid using weak subjective descriptors like "creepy," and avoid personal speculations: "I was expecting that would be the case tying in a bit more of metacinema, being that the audience seemingly had a part in its creation." First of all, analytic writing is not about what you're expectations are/were, but about what did in fact happen. You should draw conclusions from that. I know you expressed an unfamiliarity with filmmaking vocabulary, but I think a good starting point would be to select images from the films that have a metaphorical value and explain what that metaphor could possibly mean. Start from a single image and then expand your analysis (if need be) to include more content from the film. So a tight response would have been to focus on the window as a metaphor and on the viewfinder ("camera lens view") as a metaphor. How do these relate to vision, cinema, violence etc.
ReplyDeleteYou say: I was expecting that would be the case tying in a bit more of metacinema, being that the audience seemingly had a part in its creation." I want to remind that metacinema does not necessarily relate to or involve the audience, though that can be one form of metacinema. Instead it is any moment of reflexivity involving the medium of film/video/television. A moment of self-awareness.
Finally you say, "Did it really matter how they were being killed? Probably not, but the fact that I was very intrigued over this makes me think this small camera lens view was used to engage the audience"...it absolutely DOES matter how he kills. It is with the very medium that this film is a commentary on. He kills with a camera. That is of 100% importance. Explain that and then explain how the use of the cameras point of view engages the audience with the image in a unique way.